Saturday 31 January 2015

Kilynn, Part 8

I am probably sitting freezing in an ice rink in the middle of a snow storm right now. But you get to read the next part of Kilynn. This is all I have written so far. Hopefully on Monday when things are back to normal I will get the next part written. I will try this weekend to get notes written up to make writing go faster on Monday. Enjoy!

“The new queen, Dyani was her name, was always worried that my mother would return and claim the throne with the support of the people. Dyani tortured the Lady Syranne until she finally revealed the spell she used. Dyani then assembled an army to send through the tunnel in search of my mother. She needed to eliminate the threat of our bloodline. Because of the way the spell was originally created, it can only be used on the night of the new moon.

“Yes, decades have passed and most likely the new queen Dyani is dead and her heir sits on the throne. But the threat must still create fear in the queen so she continues what her mother started. Someone o on the island continues to send the army through the tunnel on the night of the new moon, using a spell Dyani created to seek out anyone with a drop of royal blood in them. They are taken back to the island and what happens to them there is not for your ears.

“But your mother is a direct descendant of the royal bloodline and the army would be able to detect that. They will take her back to the queen and she will be locked away, but not killed. From what I have heard, for I have ways of discovering things, the people of the island are still loyal to my mother and her children. If they were to find out their current queen executed Abryelle’s granddaughter she would not be queen for long. That is why I believe your mother is not dead and why I believe you can save her, Kilynn.”

Kilynn looked up at the sound of her name and saw her grandmother smiling at her. Her grandmother had always believed in her since she was a tiny child. She knew there was more to the story than what her grandmother had told her. She knew deep down inside her that Vanyssa was waiting for her on that distant island, waiting for her daughter to arrive and save her. And she would do her best not to let her mother down. She smiled back at her grandmother and said, “I believe I can too, Grandmother. Where do we start?”

Her grandmother started laughing. “Oh, you are so like your mother and your great-grandmother, Kilynn. We start with you children going home and getting some sleep. It is almost morning and your father will be worried about you.”

“Father hates me, Grandmother,” Kilynn told her. Her brothers protested this immediately but a wave of her grandmother’s hand silenced them again. Kilynn wished she had that power over all her brothers, not just her immediate siblings.

“Robbert does not hate you, child. He loves your mother very much and his pain is very new. Yes, he is angry with you and rightfully so, stubborn child. But he does not hate you. Go now, and come back to me here when the sun sets on the morrow. We shall begin our plans then.” Kilynn’s grandmother stood up and hugged each child in turn then disappeared off into the woods, away from the town. 
Kilynn always wondered where her grandmother lived. Perhaps one day soon she would find out.

As their grandmother disappeared, Ryl took Tom’s reins and Herry took Kilynn’s hand. The three siblings walked slowly back to the road and then made the mile walk back to town in silence. Each was busy mulling over the story their grandmother had told them. They passed through the small night gate and made their way quietly through the town, trying hard not to awaken any of the residents.

When they reached their house Ryl took the horse to the stables and awakened a stable boy to tend to the horse. The triplets then slipped silently into the house and up the back stairs. Kilynn, as the only daughter, climbed an extra set up steps to her room in the attic. Her door, normally closed while she was gone, stood ajar and Kilynn could see a faint candle glow through the opening. She stopped and considered tiptoeing back down the steps but stopped. She needed to face her father at some point. Better now than later, she thought to herself.

Kilynn pushed the door open slowly, stopping before it gave its customary squeak. She stepped quietly into the room and pushed the door closed. Her father sat in her chair, his elbows on his knees and his head in his hands. He seemed to sense her presence and looked up as she came in the room. 

Kilynn stopped, unsure of the look on his face. Her father stood up, his hands at his side. Father and daughter stared silently at each other for a minute. Then Robbert held out his arms to Kilynn. With a stifled sob, Kilynn threw herself into her father’s arms. He hugged her tightly while the two cried silently. After a time, Kilynn drew back a bit and looked up at her father. “I’m so sorry, Father,” she whispered.


Her father pulled her back into the hug. “So am I, Kilynn. So am I,” he replied. After another fatherly hug, he pulled back. “Now, off to bed with you. We will talk tomorrow.”

Friday 30 January 2015

Kilynn, Part 7

I'm hoping this works the way I want it to. I'm traveling today but I have this set up to post on Friday. Part 8 will go up Saturday if all goes as planned! Enjoy!

“Queen Abryelle was an intelligent woman and knew that her daughter would attempt to leave with the captain. She ordered the sailors’ ship burned in the harbour, removing what she thought was their only way of escape. But Larya, with the help of Syranne, had written a spell that would open a doorway through the earth from the island back to the sailors’ homeland.

“On the night of the new moon Princess Larya, the Syranne’s help, managed to drug the guards and free the sailors from the dungeon. The princess bribed a stable boy to prepare horses for everyone and the group slipped out of the castle, ridding miles through the woods to reach the lone mountain on the island.

“What the princess did not know is that the stable boy had been in love with Larya for a long time and could not stand the thought of her leaving forever. He betrayed the group, sending word to Queen Abryelle of the princess plan to leave. The queen sent guards after the group.

“When Larya, Syranna, and the sailors arrived at the mountain, the ladies began to cast the spell. There was a deep vibration in the ground and then all sound disappeared, leaving everyone thinking they had gone deaf. Then with a thunderous noise, a hole opened in the side of the mountain. Through the hole, the group could see a different land beyond.”

At this Kilynn and her brothers gasped. The description of the spell matched what they experienced every new moon. Kilynn’s eyes grew wide as she understood what her grandmother was telling them. Her grandmother smiled at her with a twinkle in her eye, knowing Kilynn had figured things out. A glance at her brothers told Kilynn they were still trying to puzzle it out. Her grandmother continued her story.

“The sailors began running through the tunnel one at a time, for the tunnel was narrow. Larya sent Captain Willam through, promising him she would follow after him for she needed to close the tunnel to prevent others from following them. Larya ordered Syranne down the tunnel too, but as she was about to enter the tunnel the queen’s guards appeared. Syranne, always one to protect her best friend and the heir to the throne, pushed Larya into the tunnel, telling her to run. When she was sure the princess was on her way, Syranne quickly closed the tunnel then surrendered herself to the guards.

“On the other end of the tunnel, Larya and Mikeal were heartbroken by the fact that Syranne didn’t make it through. Larya had lost her best friend and Mikeal realized too late that he had fallen in love with Syranne. The group looked around trying to figure out where they were. It was Captain Willam who recognized the mountain behind them. It is the same mountain you can see from here.” Grandmother pointed up over the trees to the mountain in the distance. Ryl and Herry gasped in understanding. Again Ryl began to interrupt his grandmother but she silenced him with a look to continue her story.


“Aye, children, the sailors and the princess came here. The Lady Syranne was taken back to Queen Abryelle and thrown in the dungeon for she refused to reveal the spell. The queen was devastated by the loss of her daughter. She lost interested in caring for her people and was soon overthrown by a rival faction. She fled to the wilds of the island to work on crafting her own spell that would take her to her daughter. As far as we know, she never succeeded.

“Here in this land, Larya discovered that she no longer had her magical abilities but she didn’t mind. She was happy to be here with her beloved captain and the two soon married. I am the first-born child of that union.” Kilynn had suspected that her grandmother was somehow related to the princess Larya so she wasn’t surprised by this announcement. She glanced at her brothers and saw that they weren’t surprised either. “My mother and father had many children, and those children have gone out into the land and had children of their own. The blood of the island has mingled with the blood of this land.”

“Grandmother, The Hunt is obviously people from the island coming here, but why? Why do they come here and steal us away?” Kilynn asked the question all three siblings were thinking.

Thursday 29 January 2015

Hockey Tournament time!

Today I have been getting ready to travel to take J to an off-island hockey tournament (I hate packing!) . It should be an exciting time since the latest weather report says there's a snow storm coming Friday night into Saturday. Guess when most of our games are? Saturday! At least the hotel we're staying at has a pool and free breakfast. I'm not looking forward to spending a weekend at a hotel in a snow storm with two kids. I hadn't planned on taking their snow gear but I may have to.

Last night, when I was looking at the weather report it reminded me of a time long ago in my life BK (before kids). My in-laws lived down in Birmingham, AL. We lived in the DC area. We decided it would be fun (and cheaper) to drive down there to visit them rather than fly. This was a good plan in theory. Of course we got hit by an ice storm on the way down. Visibility was zero, the wipers kept icing up, and people were getting stuck everywhere. We someone how made it down there by it was a terrible drive.

After a week or so there it was time to drive back home. Guess what? We got hit by another ice storm on the way back up. We ended up stopping because it was just too dangerous to continue. We managed to find a hotel with a room but then they lost power. The only place to eat was a McDonalds next door which somehow had power. We went through the drive-thru and I got chicken nuggets. We ate when we got back to the room. I was disgusted to find that my chicken nuggets were only half cooked. While I didn't get sick (thankfully) I felt like I was going to be sick all night. I was very happy when we were able to get back on the road the next day and get home safely.

So,I am a little hesitant at being in a hotel in a snow storm. I'm sure it will be fine by I remember that horrible trip with the two ice storms. I should clarify that by saying the time with my in-laws wasn't terrible, just the travel part.

I am trying something new with the blog this weekend, since it will be tough for me to get time to post things this weekend. I have scheduled Friday and Saturday's posts to be published at a certain time. I hope it works! I will be back home on Sunday and back to writing then.

Have a good weekend!

Wednesday 28 January 2015

#BellLetsTalk

I was going to share more of Kilynn's story but then I remembered that today is #BellLetsTalk day. Bell Aliant is going to donate $0.05 for every tweet/retweet on Twitter with that hashtag and every share on Facebook for mental health initiatives. Please, go now and tweet it. I'll wait. :-)

Mental illness is not fun. I think everyone out there knows someone, or has been that someone, who is struggling with mental illness. Oftentimes, no one knows that struggle is going on. So many people walk around, looking normal and happy, but they are struggling inside to hold it together. And often people don't want to talk about it with others because they are afraid of how people will judge them. Please, be kind to each other. Help each other. If someone is struggling with mental illness, let them know you won't judge them and that you are there for them.

Remember, you are not alone. If you're struggling with mental illness, please ask for help. Talk to someone. There are wonderful people out there who want to help you and will not judge you. And if you are lucky enough not to be dealing with mental illness, reach out to someone who is. Go tweet the hashtag #BellLetsTalk. Seriously, that's all you have to put in your tweet. The more we make it okay for people to talk about their mental health, the better it will be for all of us. Take the time to take care of your mental health as well as your physical health.

I personally know quite a few people who struggle with things like depression and anxiety. If my tweeting a simple hashtag can help fund programs to help them, then I will keep tweeting it today. So should you. Go now. #BellLetsTalk.


Tuesday 27 January 2015

Kilynn, part 6

Snow day! The blizzard arrived as promised and the kids are home from school. Thankfully the hubby came home early enough yesterday to take J to hockey so I had an extra hour before having to take S to soccer. I used that extra hour to do editing/character names as well as add to what I had written yesterday. With the kids home, it is often hard to find time to write, so I'm glad I have a few days worth of writing done.

This next section of the story, where Kilynn's grandmother explains the Hunt is long. I'm going to break it up over a few days to spare your eyes reading it on the screen. A quick recap of part 5 - Kilynn learned that her mother had been taken by the Hunt and that her father blamed her for it. She fled the city and went to her favorite place in the woods where her grandmother was waiting. Ryl and Herry had followed Kilynn and the three of them had just settled down to listen to their grandmother tell them about the Hunt. Here we go:

Kilynn, part 6

“The story of the Hunt begins just over a hundred years ago, on an island far on the other side of this world. It is a small island in the middle of a vast ocean, with no other land close by. The waters surrounding the ocean are turbulent, even in the calm season. In the storm season the island disappears into a cloud of mist, obscuring it from the view. In addition to the churning waters, it is said that large, dangerous creatures feast upon any ship that dares sail near the island. Because of this, the people of the island lived in near isolation from the world around them. And this didn’t bother them for their few encounters with outsiders never went well.

“I can see you want to ask why. I shall tell you. The people of the island appear human, like you, but they are a little more than human. They possess a spark in their soul that grants them magical abilities. Even the smallest child on the island can control the basic elements of earth, air, fire, and water. As they grow older, children are taught how to use their abilities to contribute to their society. The cities on the island are lovely places, with beautifully sculpted buildings and statues, well-tended gardens, and clear, pure water to drink.”

Ryl started to speak, interrupting his grandmother, but she put a finger to her lips to quiet him. “Be patient Ryl, and wait until my story is done. If you still have questions when I am through, then you may ask them. But for now, be quiet and listen.”

“Any time outsiders had visited the island they were intrigued by the mysterious powers of the islanders. They would often try to kidnap some of the citizens, enslaving them to harness their magical powers. But once off the island, their powers faded and many of the citizens were killed or turned out and left on their own to struggle to survive or die. It is said that the queen, Abryelle, cast a spell upon the ocean to churn up the waters surrounding the island in hopes of protecting her people from outsiders. She also instructed them, that should an outsider ever arrive on the island again, to hide their abilities. She would do anything to protect her people.

“Life was good and simple on the island and the people loved their queen. She had born one daughter, who was named her heir, and many sons. The children were also adored by the people, for they were sweet children who were eager to do their best to keep the island safe and happy.

“One day when the princess, Larya, had reached her eighteenth birthday, a large wooden ship sailed into the harbour of the main city on the island. The people were shocked that someone had managed to sail through the troubled waters and reach their remote island. When the captain and his crew disembarked, they were surprised by the beautiful city they found and the peaceful but scared people that greeted him.

“The captain, Willam, was escorted to Queen Abryelle, where an offer of friendship was cautiously made. The captain revealed that he and his crew had been blown off course while trying to sail from one land to another and had no knowledge of the island. Abryelle was suspicious of this until the captain showed her a map which did not include the island. Hoping to keep the magically abilities of the islanders a secret, the queen would not let Captain Willam and his crew leave the castle grounds.

“At first, Willam was angered by this for he wished to leave the island and return to his exploration of the seas. But with storm season starting the queen could not in good conscience let them leave for doing so would be sending them to their deaths. Willam would stalk around the castle grounds in a huff until the day he met the princess.

“Princess Larya had been away when Captain Willam arrived in the city and did not return until he had been there a month. Larya was mesmerized when she saw him for the first time for he was so different than the men of the island with their dark hair and eyes, and pale skin. He was taller than anyone else on the island, with silky blond hair and bright emerald green eyes that stood out against his suntanned skin. Willam, likewise, was entranced with the beautiful daughter of the queen. She had long dark hair like the other women of the island, but her eyes were a rare bright blue instead of the usual brown of her people."

At this description, Ryl and Herry looked over in surprise at Kilynn for their grandmother had just described her. She was taller than her grandmother, but Kilynn’s hair was a deep brown-black and her eyes were bright blue. Kilynn looked at her brother and saw they could be related to the captain her grandmother was describing with their blond hair and green eyes. Their grandmother smiled at them as they studied each other then went back to her story.

“Captain Willam and Larya began to spend a lot of time together, and this concerned her mother. As the heir to the throne, the princess was to marry a man of her mother’s choosing – someone of a high background that would help to continue the royal bloodline. Thinking it would help reduce their interest in each other, Abryelle reluctantly allowed Willam to leave the castle and explore the city. She knew this was dangerous for the captain would see her people using their abilities. But the captain was too entranced with the Larya to be bothered with the people of the city.

“The crew, on the other hand, were jealous of the abilities of the islanders. The first mate, a man named Mikeal, started plotting a way to get one of the islanders onto their ship, thinking their abilities to control water and the oceans would be beneficial on their long voyage. Mikeal had noticed that Larya’s best friend, the Lady Syranne, had taken an interest in him. He pursued this relationship, hoping to entice Syranne of leaving the island with them. Mikeal did not realize that Syranne’s powers would fade when she left the island. Syranne had heard rumours that her abilities would fade, but she had fallen in love with Mikeal and would do anything for him and agreed to help him.

 “Abryelle saw that things were quickly becoming serious between her daughter and the captain and knew she had to put a stop to it. She had Willam and his crew locked up, first in their rooms and then in the dungeon when Larya let them out of their rooms. And although she could not lock her daughter up in the dungeon also, she assigned a constant guard to keep an eye on the young woman.

“Knowing that her mother would never allow them to marry, Larya began to plan for a way for her and Willam to be together. Mikeal revealed to the captain his relationship with the Lady Syranne and the captain managed to pass this information on to the princess. The two ladies began working together to come up with a way to free the sailors and leave the island.



Monday 26 January 2015

Monday, Monday

Today is another bright and sunny day - the calm before the storm. Tomorrow we're expecting a blizzard, which means the kids and the hubby will all be home tomorrow. So I took advantage of the quiet today and worked more on the section of Kilynn that I'm writing. I'm still not ready to put it up here yet - it needs some editing and some of the people need names. I need to do some searching online on some baby name websites to help me.

Even though everyone will most likely be home tomorrow I am going to try to grab an hour or so to revise/edit the section I've been working on lately so I can get it up. It is long so I will have to break it up over two days for publishing it. I'm eager to keep writing because I know what's going to happen next and want to get it down on paper but I really do need to finish polishing up the current section first.

Mondays are always a crazy day. I probably should have spent more time writing today but I was so close to finishing a hat that I wanted to get that done. It's for my friend and I hope she likes it. It's very similar to a hat worn by her favorite character in the first season on her favorite show. I saw it and thought of her. I like how it turned out so I may have to make myself one. She and I can be all cutesy and have matching hats. :-)

Okay, it's soon time for the kids to be home and then we're off to hockey and soccer. Like I said, Mondays are a bit crazy for us. Maybe I will try to do my editing while I'm waiting so I can have more time to write tomorrow during the blizzard.

And did you watch Galavant last night? If you didn't, shame on you. Once again it was damn funny! And they left us with a cliffhanger for season two! I can't wait for season two. :-)

Sunday 25 January 2015

Day 21 and I'm missing the mountains

It is the perfect time to write. S is occupied watching Veggie Tales on TV, while the hubby has taken J to his hockey practice. Things are quiet and I should be able to focus but I just can't today. I'm not sure why because yesterday I was able to crank out 1k words but today nada. I tried and nothing was sounding right so I'm going to take that as a sign that today is not a writing day. Maybe it's because today I am feeling a little homesick. I'm definitely not missing the traffic and hectic lifestyle of the DC area. And as I think they are prepping for Snowmageddon down there I'm double glad I'm not there. But there are certainly things I do miss. 

This morning it was bright and sunny here after the crazy storm we had last night. It started out with a dusting of snow - not even enough to measure. Then it warmed up enough to turn to rain. And egads, rain it did. We have these drainage ditches in front of the house that are a few feet deep (I think). The snow has kind of blocked them up so with the deluge of water we had coming down last night the ditches filled up. There was water flowing out of the ditch and into the street and it was that way all down our street. Last spring we had drainage issues on the side of the house that resulted in the garage flooding a few times. The problem was fixed but last night we were worried the garage would start flooding again. Thankfully it didn't.

I was glad to see the sun this morning. And for some reason it made me miss the Shenandoah mountains. I couldn't help thinking that it would be a good morning to get in the car and just drive up to the mountains and stop at our favorite burger place, Burgers 'N Things, then cruise along Skyline Drive looking for deer and bears. We'd bundle up and find a place to hike. With rain like we had last night, the waterfalls in the park would be spectacular. At this time of year our favorite ice cream place, Effee's would be closed, so we would just drive straight home after the hike rather than stopping for ice cream.

There are definitely things I love about living here on our little island in Canada. There is a beach within walking distance of our house, and there are other beaches that are no more than 30 minutes away from us. Back in VA it was a 4 hour drive on a good day to the closest beach. I love the slow pace of the island. I love all the farms and being able to show my kids where their food really comes from. I love that the neighbourhood we live in is filled with kids and their wonderful parents. I love that there are so many professional hockey players (former and current) around us that can share their knowledge with my son. But on a day like today, I really miss the mountains.


Okay, I made it to day 21. I feel this has become a habit. I look forward to sitting down at my computer each day and seeing what ends up on my virtual paper. Some days I know what I'm going to write ahead of time but other days, like today, I just sit down and start typing and see what happens. Either way, I've found it's a good experience to just sit and put my thoughts down. I encourage everyone out there to do the same. You don't have to share it with people, but do take the time to write. You'll be surprised by what you can do.

Saturday 24 January 2015

Not such a lazy Saturday

Today has and hasn't been a lazy Saturday. S was supposed to go to swimming today but since we got home late last night from hockey - where J's team won yay! - she was pretty tired today and didn't want to go. I wish she had because she'll miss next Saturday when we're away for a hockey tournament. We did have a nice lunch out at a local restaurant and then a fun trip to the comic book store and the used book store. Two comic books and two chapter books later, the kids are happy.

When we got home, J wanted to play video games, S wanted to do puzzles, and the hubby decided to "watch" TV (aka snooze on the sofa). It was a perfect time for me to sit down and do some writing. Without any distractions beyond S coming in occasionally to show me the puzzle she finished, I cranked out 1000 words! I'm not ready to put it up here yet because I'm still working on this section. I like to have a whole section done before I put it up in case I want to rewrite/clarify/expand something I've written. I'm excited though that I was able to get so much written about the history of The Hunt. I feel like the story is coming together but there are a few parts that may need to be reworked before it goes out into the interwebz.

Tomorrow is a free day for us - no hockey scheduled (so far) and the weather is suppose to be rather messy. A few days ago they were saying it was going to be a classic Nor'easter with lots of snow and wind but now they are only saying a few centimeters of snow followed by rain with the temperature actually warming up quite a bit before falling back down to bloody cold. With the potential for nasty weather in the morning and the fact that nothing around here really opens until noon on Sundays, I should be able to squeeze in some time to finish the story section I'm working on. I don't want to call it a chapter because it's just a story, not a novel. Maybe one day it will be revised into a novel but for now it's just a story I'm writing.

I did manage to finish the hubby's hat last night and he tested it out today. It got his seal of approval - it is warm and thick enough to block the wind. J was eyeing it, saying he wanted one too, but the hubby mentioned he wants a scarf to match the hat, so I don't know if I'll have enough yarn for both. And I'm trying my best to go the whole month of January without buying any yarn - so far so good. We'll see how it goes! And now I'm off to finish reworking a hat I ripped out and celebrate writing a thousand words by having a cookie and possibly a third cup of tea. Have a good weekend!

Friday 23 January 2015

My thoughts on my writing

Today I had a choice to make. I could choose to spend time working on my story or I could work on the hat I'm making for my hubby. Since there is a storm coming this weekend I decided to work on his hat - a hat made with yarn from my stash (sticking to my resolution!). I am trying to finish up the hat before tonight's hockey game, but I don't think that's going to happen unless I work on it in the car on the way to the rink which I may do unless I can get a little more time for knitting.

While I was knitting I was thinking about my story and where it is going. I've worked out quite a few details about what the Hunt actually is and how it started. I'm still mulling things over in my head a bit though because I'm not completely sure I like what I've come up with. The only way I'll really know is if I put the words down on my virtual paper and see how it goes.

Writing this story is quite a bit different than what I used to do with the video game company. With gaming, I had guidelines for writing - a world already existed. I was given the background to the world, so I knew who and what was going to shape my writing. Even when I got to the point where I was writing the back story for an expansion pack, I still had the existing world to guide my writing. Sometimes that did make it difficult to be as creative as I wanted to be but overall I think it was a bit easier writing stories for a world that already existed than creating my own world.

Also, my video game writing was more structured. In most cases, I had a very definite goal in mind and the story wasn't novel-length, just long enough to get the basic story across and help the player more through the world and complete the quest they were doing. I'm sure many players didn't even bother reading what was written beyond seeing where they needed to go or what they needed to do. But I did try my best to give the players who read the story a decent story.

My Kilynn story has been a fun challenge for me so far. With no world to guide my writing, I've had to create the world, first in my head and now I've started making world notes on paper so I can keep things straight in the story. I've had to create the characters, not use ones that were already existing in a video game world, and give them lives and hopes and dreams. I am having to create the myths and legends of this world I'm creating. All in all, I'm having fun with the story and just the process of writing.

One thing I do like is not having any deadlines like I had when I was working for the video game company. I can write when I want, and don't have to when I don't feel like it. I am writing for the pleasure of writing. I encourage everyone to try it, even if it's just writing down a few lines about something you dreamed about, or something that happened to you. Once you start writing a few lines you may find that those few lines suddenly turn into almost 4800 words and counting.

I don't know what I'll do with my story when it's done. I don't even know when it will be done. But I know I will enjoy the process of getting there. :-)

Thursday 22 January 2015

Ah Thursday

"It must be Thursday. I never could get the hang of Thursdays." - Arthur Dent, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy

That's how I often feel on Thursdays. I can totally sympathize with Arthur Dent and how he feels about Thursdays. It's such a blah day of the week. When you look at all the days, Thursday comes out last on the list. Don't believe me? Let's see:

Friday - the last day of the work week for a lot people, which is good

Saturday - weekend - woohoo!

Sunday - still weekend, although not as good as Saturday because well, tomorrow is Monday

Monday - some people would say this is the worst day of the week, but as a SAHM, Mondays are nice. The kids are off to school so there is a break from all of the crazy weekend activities. Although Mondays are a bit crazy since J's hockey practice at the same time S's soccer practice starts but we have a system down now so it's all good.

Tuesday - an okay day. By Tuesday people are getting back into their work groove, kids are in their school groove, and I'm in my SAHM groove of doing laundry.

Wednesday - The middle of the week. We made it this far and the end of the week is only two days away. But before we can get to Friday we have to get to...

Thursday (dun-dun-dunnnnnn) - That's where we are today. By Thursday I'm tired of getting up at 6:15 every morning to get the kids ready for school. I have to pack two lunches on Thursdays instead of one since neither child buys a lunch that day. I usually have to go to the grocery store on Thursdays to get ready for the weekend.By Thursday I'm tired of cooking but not feeling like going out to eat either (we're ordering pizza tonight). Last Thursday I found out that all the Targets in Canada are closing, which sucked (Target was like a little piece of the DC area up here for me and I love shopping there). I made a cup of tea to drink while I sulked and promptly spilled it down the front of my shirt. Luckily the stain came out but it still made me grumpy. I even think it was a Thursday when I broke my toe last year (okay, it probably wasn't but I can blame it on Thursday).

My kids and hubby have just about gotten over their colds. I can tell my body has been fighting getting sick for the last few weeks. I woke up today, a Thursday, and could feel the pressure building in my ears and head, which triggered my vertigo problems. So I've been quite dizzy today. On a Thursday. See what I mean?

I had planned to do more writing today but with my head feeling like someone is squeezing it while I'm on a tilt-a-whirl, I decided to just rest and wait for Friday. Friday is a much better day of the week. I'm sure Arthur Dent would agree with me. :-)

Wednesday 21 January 2015

Kilynn Part 5

It is amazing what even a decent night's sleep can do for creativity. My head is so much clearer today and when I sat down to write without the distractions of children and their homework the words flowed easily. I was able to write quite a bit and there is more waiting to be written once I sort out some details but I am much happier with things today than I was yesterday.

I had planned to do a Galavant recap today but Kilynn wanted to be heard and chunks of the broadcast were missing from the DVR, so no recap this week. If you missed it, you missed Weird Al as a singing monk and Ricky Gervais as Xanax, who provided an interesting "potion" to King Richard. There are parts of me that really wish Galavant was a season long series but most of me is glad it's only four weeks. I think that's the perfect length for a show like this. I'll be sad to see it end but I'll enjoy the laughs I got from it.

And now, here is the next installment of Kilynn's story. Perhaps one of these days I'll actually come up with a title for it. :-) For those that don't want to go back and reread, Kilynn has learned that her mother was taken by The Hunt and that her father blames her for it.


Behind her, Ryl and Herry voiced their protest as their father’s accusation. But Kilynn held up her hand and silenced them with a simple, “No.” Still looking at her father she continued, “He’s correct. This is my fault. I was the one who argued with Mother and Father this morning. I was the one who fled the house, and left the safety of the town walls. I was the one who fell asleep in the woods on tonight of all nights.” She turned to face her brothers. “And I was the one who put both of you in danger, looking for me at the town wall.”

“But Kilynn –“ Herry began but Kilynn cut him off.

“Herry, do you really think Mother would stay home when she thought one of us was in danger? And this time it was three of us, for you two were obviously waiting for me at the wall.” Herry looked away from her gaze, knowing she was right. This was all her fault, and she had to make it right.

“Father,” she said, turning back towards him but her next words died on her tongue. The sadness and anger in her father’s eyes was more than she could stand. She could tell he was furious with her as well as heartbroken over the loss of his wife. Kilynn didn't know what to say to make things better. Perhaps there wasn't anything to say. Father and daughter stood staring at each other, without speaking until Kilynn couldn't take it anymore. Without a word she turned and fled from the town square, the tears once again flowing down her face.

Behind her in the distance she could hear Ryl and Herry calling her name but she ignored them. She ran as fast as she could, turning randomly down streets, determined to leave her brothers and her father’s sadness behind. When their voices faded Kilynn stopped to wipe away the tears and catch her breath. Looking around, she realized she wasn't far from the very town gates where her brothers had rescued her. She needed to get out of the town walls and away from the mess she had made.

Kilynn walked the rest of the way to the gates, stopping at the fountain just inside for a quick drink of water. Now that The Hunt had passed the smaller night gate was open. She nodded in greeting to the guard on duty then passed through the gate. Once out of the gate, she began walked left along the wall, suddenly remembering the horse she had left in her mad climb up the ladder. Her horse wasn't there, but she found her leather sack on the ground. She wasn't surprised she had dropped it with all the chaos that had been doing on around her. Opening the sack she found her small lantern, its candle askew in the holder. She straightened the candle and lit it with the flint she kept in her sack. With the candle’s soft glow to guide her, Kilynn began the mile-long walk down the road and into the woods.

The woods were filled with the quiet sounds of night creatures and it soothed Kilynn’s nerves to know that things were back to normal. Using her lantern to guide her, she made her way through the woods and back to the pond where she had earlier fallen asleep. She dropped down onto the soft moss at the pond’s edge and buried her face in her hands, taking deep breaths to try to control the sobbing that was bubbling up in her chest.

Kilynn was so focused on trying not to cry she didn't hear the quiet footsteps behind her until a soft, velvety nose touched her shoulder, letting out a nicker of greeting. Kilynn raised her head from her hands to see her horse, Tom, standing next to her. Her dear, sweet horse had somehow survived The Hunt! She hugged his head as the sobs overwhelmed her yet again.

“Oh Tom, my mother is dead! But you managed to survive,” she whispered in the horse’s ear. Tom nuzzled her cheek, trying to comfort her.

“She’s not dead, dearest, just taken.”

Kilynn leapt to her feet, spinning in a circle to see who was in the glade with her. The light from the candle was too weak for Kilynn to see more than a few feet away. “Who’s there?” she called.

“Why dearest, don’t you recognize the voice of your own grandmother?” the voice called as a tiny, black-haired woman stepped into the circle of light from the lantern. Kilynn let out a squeal of joy and threw herself into her grandmother’s arms. Even at 18 years old, Kilynn still loved her grandmother’s hugs. They made her feel safe and happy, as if nothing in the world could harm her again. Her grandmother drew her in close and allowed her to sob into her shoulder. Although she didn’t visit much, Kilynn’s grandmother always seemed to know when one of her grandchildren was in need and came to their aid. Kilynn was grateful for her grandmother’s arms around her, comforting her.

“Now dearest, time to get those tears under control. As I said, your mother is not dead. Yes, she was taken by The Hunt but they did not take her to kill her. Oh no, they have other plans for your mother.” Kilynn leaned back a bit and looked at her grandmother’s face. Although it was wrinkled with age, she was still beautiful, her blue eyes were still bright and lively and her hair was still black, without a touch of gray. At times people had thought she was Vanyssa’s older sister and not her mother.

“What are you talking about, Grandmother? Everyone knows The Hunt kills their victims. Mother isn't alive anymore.”

“Yes, child, she is and that is why I am here. Come, let us sit here and talk. But first,” Grandmother paused and looked out into the woods. “Come out, boys. I know you’re there. You might as well come give your grandmother a hug and then sit with us while I tell my story.” Ryl and Herry stepped out of the woods looking rather sheepish. Somehow Kilynn was not surprised that they had managed to follow her. She smiled as first Ryl then Herry hugged their grandmother tightly.

The four of them settled comfortably on the ground by the pond. Tom walked over to nuzzle Grandmother’s shoulder. She reached into a basket that Kilynn swore wasn’t there a minute before and pulled out an apple. Tom delicately took the apple with his teeth and walked away, crunching happily. Grandmother reached into the basket and pulled out three more apples as well as some cheese, bread, and flasks of sweet berry juice. The triplets began to eat quietly while their Grandmother began her tale.

“What do you children know of The Hunt?” she asked.

Ryl stopped chewing and answered, “The Hunt is full of monsters and demons. They come down from the mountains once a month, on the night of the new moon, to feast upon any unfortunate souls they happen across.”

“Any why do they do this? Why only once a month? Why not every night?” Grandmother asked, looking at each child in turn. The three shook their heads, unable to answer that question. “And when did The Hunt start?” she continued.

“There has always been The Hunt, for as long as anyone can remember,”Herry answered. At that, Grandmother laughed.

“I can remember quite a long time, children, and I remember a time without The Hunt.” At that, Kilynn and her brothers exclaimed in surprise. A time without The Hunt? That seemed like a fairy tale to Kilynn. Grandmother laughed again at the surprised look on their faces.


“I see your mother and father have chosen not to tell you the truth about The Hunt. I am not surprised that your father would keep this a secret. He is not one for tales of old and strange legends. But your mother, I raised her better than that. Well, I shall have to have a word or two with her when she returns. And don’t look at me like that, she will return,” Grandmother said, silencing their protests. “I will tell you the truth about The Hunt.”


Tuesday 20 January 2015

Tomorrow...tomorrow...I love ya, tomorrow...

Today is one of those days when I'm struggling with motivation. I have a bunch of words in my head but getting them out and on my virtual paper is just not happening today. Two nights of not sleeping well is catching up to me. The words are there, but they aren't the right words - at least for me they aren't. I feel like Kilynn wants the story to go one place and I want it to go another, and so there's a bit of an argument going on. She thinks they are the right words and is being difficult about it. I think maybe if I can get a good night's sleep tonight she and I might be able to agree on where the story needs to go next.

Even writing today's blog entry is tough. I've written a bunch and then promptly deleted it because it sounded whiny, or grumpy, or just plain stupid. See, kids? This is why you need to get a good night's sleep. Thinking and being creative is tough when you haven't slept well.

Also, I made the mistake of not sitting down at the computer earlier before the kids got home. I need quiet to write and focus, especially on days like today, and with two kids home and doing homework and needing my attention, it's hard to focus on getting the story straight and not making it sound stupid.

Ack. Okay, I give up today. The words are just not coming, even for this blog. But at least I sat down and did a little writing. Tomorrow will be a better day. Tomorrow I will try to answer the questions the hubby asked me about the story. Tomorrow Kilynn and I will figure out where things are going. Tomorrow, tomorrow...now I wish I had Annie on DVD...that song is stuck in my head. Until tomorrow, then.

Monday 19 January 2015

Kilynn, part 4

I got a good long time today to work on Kilynn's story. I still have a lot of work to do on it, but here is part of what I wrote today. I am not totally sure I like everything I wrote and may go back and change some things, but for now I'll put it out there as is.

Herry walked up and stood next to her as she stared at the sky. He glanced up and sighed. “We’ll need to go soon, Kilee. The reports should be in soon and Mother and Father will be expecting us home.” Kilynn smiled at Herry’s use of her nickname. He hadn’t called her Kilee since they became teenagers and she threw a fit about how babyish the nickname sounded. But her smile faded as she turned towards Herry. 

“Do we have to go home? How about we go hear the report first. I’m just not ready to face Mother and Father yet,” she replied. The thought of the fight that had sent her fleeing the town was still fresh in her mind. She wasn't quite ready to forgive her parents yet and knowing how stubborn her parents could be, she was pretty sure they weren't ready either. It usually took everyone a day or two to calm down and think rationally.

“Yes, let’s go. They will be ringing the bell soon. We can ask Wyllam how angry Mother and Father still are, although I expect that your disappearing act hasn't helped them calm down any. But don’t worry, baby sister, I will be there when you see Mother and Father again. I am on your side. And Ryl is too, even if he doesn't often show it.” Herry grabbed her hand as they started to walk to the steps.

As they walked towards the town square, Kilynn couldn't help but think how different her brothers were. She, Herry and Ryl were triplets, a rarity in their town. Mother had told them that she had known she was pregnant with at least two babies, for she could feel two heads and four feet kicking her. Herry and Ryl were born within minutes of each other, with identical faces, blond hair, and green eyes like their father. Then came Kilynn, her surprise baby, as Mother called her. She was born with a full head of dark hair and bright blue eyes. All three babies cried non-stop until Mother had put the three of them into the cradle together. Snuggled up together, the triplets stopped crying and promptly fell asleep.

As they grew older, it became apparently that they had very different personalities. While they were identical in looks and build, Ryl was short tempered and held grudges while Herry was patient and forgiving. Kilynn, being the youngest and only daughter in the family, grew up to be stubborn and fierce, unafraid to try anything her six older brothers were doing. She was a good foot shorter than her brothers, and didn't resemble anyone in her family but her mother, who also had dark hair and blue eyes. While her twin brothers often teased her for looking nothing like them, they would protect her ferociously if anyone should dare to pick on her. It was comforting to know that Kilynn could depend on them when she needed them. She smiled up at Herry and gave his hand a gentle squeeze as they turned the corner into the town square.

The town square was filling with people. Looking around, Kilynn spotted the familiar faces of neighbours and friends. A look of relief often passed over people’s faces as they spotted loved ones, realizing they had not been lost to The Hunt. Kilynn and Herry both scanned the crowd, trying to spot their oldest brother, Wyllam.

“There he is,” Herry said, pointing to a tall, dark haired man standing near the edge of the podium. As Herry and Kilynn made their way through the crowd, Herry said, “Wow, Father is here too. In fact, it looks like all of our older brothers are here.”

That worried Kilynn. Perhaps Ryl hadn't made it back to home in time before Father sent Wyll with the report. Kilynn scanned the crowd and didn't see her mother. That worried her even more. Perhaps her family thought she hadn't survived and came here to hear her name be read. Maybe her mother was too upset, thinking her only daughter was lost, to come to hear the reading of the names. But then Kilynn saw Ryl standing on the other side of Wyll. Now she was very confused. Where was Mother?

Kilynn and Herry walked up and stood by Ryl, Herry placing her between himself and Ryl. Wyll walked over to Herry and whispered something in his ear then returned to his place by Father’s side. Father glanced over at them and nodded in greeting to Herry but totally ignored Kilynn. Oh dear she thought, Father is really angry with me, and rightfully so. I screwed up big this time. She glanced around at her other brothers but none of them made eye contact with her. She knew she was really in the doghouse. Sometimes it really stinks to be the only daughter out of seven children, she couldn’t help thinking.

The Captain of the Guard stepped up on the podium and the crowd that had been quietly talking fell silent. The Captain cleared his throat and began to speak. “This time around I am happy to say we only lost 10 people to The Hunt.  I want to thank….” Kilynn tuned the Captain out while he made his long-winded speech about how he was grateful to the citizens for doing their best to keep safe during these times. She perked up again as he read the first name. It was not a name she recognized, but she still felt bad for the family nearby as they sobbed at the loss of their loved one.

Slowly, allowing each family time to grieve a bit, the Captain read the names. As he neared the end of the list, Kilynn glanced up at her Father and was surprised to see tears rolling down his face. Was one of the lost people his friend? She hadn’t recognized any of the names so far so she didn't think so. Then she noticed that there were tears on her brothers’ faces also. She felt Herry, and surprisingly Ryl, slip their hands into hers as the Captain announced he had reached the final name. The final name must be a friend of theirs, Kilynn thought. That’s why her mother wasn't here – she was upset at losing a friend. Kilynn braced herself to hear the name of their now-gone friend.

“Vanyssa Frankson,” The Captain announced.

Kilynn let out a gasp as if someone had just kicked her in the stomach, driving all the air from her lungs. Why had the Captain just called out her mother’s name? She glanced at her father and saw he had his face buried in his hands, sobbing. Her brothers were hugging each other, crying as well. Kilynn sank to her knees, jerking her hands from her brothers’ grasp and wrapping them around her stomach as she struggled to breathe.

“No,” she whispered over and over, shaking her head. “No, not mother.” She heard someone yelling no over and over but didn't realize it was her own voice until Herry and Ryl sank down beside her, wrapping their arms around her, both calling her name. As their voices broke through her screaming, she stopped and began to sob, tears pouring down her face. She buried her face into the shoulders of her brothers and cried as if her heart was broken.

Kilynn glanced up as she felt a strange hand touch her head then another. The townspeople were clearing the square, now that the Captain was done. Friends of theirs walked by slowly, stopping to lay a hand on her father’s shoulder, nod to her brothers, pat her head, letting her family know they weren’t alone in their grief. Kilynn looked at her father and saw that he was struggling to get himself under control. She did the same, taking deep breaths of air to clear her head. Ryl and Herry realized what she was doing and slowly released her from their protective arms.

Kilynn struggled to her feet and faced her father. “How?”she asked. “How did this happen?” She needed to know what happened to her mother. Her mother was always so careful, making sure to be in a safe place on the night of The Hunt. How could her mother have been taken?

“Do you really want to discuss this here?” her father asked, looking at her for the first time since she arrived in the square. Kilynn thought about it for a moment. The few people that were left in the square probably already knew what had happened, and anyway, she didn't care if they heard what her father had to say. All she cared about was knowing what happened to her mother. She looked her father in the eye and nodded. Father stood staring at her for a minute. There wasn't any anger in his face anymore, only sadness. “Fine. I will tell you,” he said then paused to give her a chance to stop him. When she didn't he continued, “She went out looking for you. It is all your fault.”

Sunday 18 January 2015

Sunday evening post

Sorry for the lack of creative title - some days call for blah titles. :-)

Ah Sunday...I realized the day was coming to a close and I had yet to write a blog post. I figured I would have to wait until the kids went to bed, or at least until S went to bed, to get a chance to write. But after we ate supper the hubby took the kids across the street to skate on the neighbour's rink so I cranked up the music, fired up the laptop, and sat down to write. I may or may not have danced around, singing along with Shake It Off first. Damn that song is catchy.

S had a birthday party to go to today so I took her while the hubby took J to his hockey game. The host mom said parents didn't need to stay so I left for a bit to go wash my filthy car. It had reached the point where I couldn't stand to even be close to it. Yeah, it got dirty driving around on sloppy roads afterwards but it was at least cleaner than before. After the car wash I decided I wanted to find a certain knitting magazine but that meant going into dangerous territory - Michael's Craft store.

I went into the store determined I would keep my resolution to not buy yarn unless I needed it, which at this time I don't need it. I will admit, it was very hard. I walked around, touching all the pretty yarn, picking it up, and then carefully putting in back down. I tried very hard to ignore the fact that most of the yarn was on SALE. It was a really good sale too - some yarns were 50% off. But as I had no need of yarn, I made myself walk away. I couldn't find the magazine I wanted so I left. Without buying ANYTHING. I was proud of myself for sticking to my resolution. I went over to the bookstore and although I couldn't find the magazine I wanted I did find a few others I liked. I looked at it as a reward for sticking to my resolution.

As for my other resolution of writing every day, I was thinking about my Kilynn story today. I was trying to figure out where the story was going and not coming up with much. Then at a time when I couldn't get to my computer to write, Kilynn and her brothers told me where they wanted the story to go. The gave me the plot and now it's my job to get them there. So tomorrow, after the kids go off to school, and either before or after I hit the grocery store, I will sit down and write about the plot my characters gave me.

Galavant will have to wait for Tuesday. Make sure you watch it tonight - Ricky Gervais is on tonight as Xanax. I'm looking forward to it. But now I'll keep this short and go over to my friend's backyard and hang out until it's time for the showering of the children. No, I will not be skating. In high school I was a really good skater. I stopped skating in college (lack of time) and over time my center of gravity has changed. The last time I went skating I ended up with pulled, possibly torn, muscles in my bicep and shoulder. It was not fun. I enjoy watching and chatting with friends.

I'd like to give a shout out to a long-time friend and former co-worker of mine who writes a blog too. She was kind enough to give me a shout-out today and I want to return the favour. She writes a good blog. Enjoy! Lahdeedah's blog

Saturday 17 January 2015

Brrr It's Cold!

Today was a very cold day. When I woke up this morning it was -5F with a wind chill of something like -20F. And I when I looked outside at that time, there was a runner, wearing just running pants, a fleecie, hat, and mitts running down the street. I'm sorry, but sometimes I have to think runners are just plain crazy. She definitely is made of tougher stuff than me to be out running in that cold.

Apparently my son is made of tougher stuff than I am too because he went over to a friend's house and skated on their outdoor rink. The other boy's mom made them take warming breaks but still. It was like 0F when they were skating. They had a lot of fun skating and hanging out.

I stayed inside today. It is just too damn cold out for me. Instead, I curled up and finished reading Outlander. It was really good! I would have finished it last night but I got to the point where I was reading the same sentence over and over and nothing made sense. I went ahead and downloaded the second book as well as The Atlantis Gene. I haven't started either one yet since I can't decide which to read although I am leaning towards the latter.

I also finally finished J's massive MegaBloks Halo set. Here it is all finished:


I have to say, quality control on MegaBloks is lacking. They didn't give me enough of some pieces and too many of other pieces. Some pieces were damn near impossible to snap together while others won't "stick". And we managed to lose the other red wing stud in the picture, so it only has one wing light. If it bother's J he can raid his Lego stash and find a clear red stud and stick it on there. But based on the explosions and battle noises coming from his room, I don't think he minds.

I also helped S build some things with her Roominate set. If you haven't seen Roominate before, it's pretty cool. Their website is Roominate. The concept is pretty cool - kind of free form dollhouse building. So far I've been doing most of the building, but I make sure S is watching so she knows how to build for next time. She has the Chateau set and it's a big enough set to let her build lots of things.

Tonight I plan to curl up on the couch and watch some hockey and work on one of my two knitting projects. My newest friend moved into the neighbourhood at the beginning of the school year. They are still unpacking, so she hasn't found her hats and mitts yet (silly!). So I decided to make her a hat. It's a simple diagonal rib pattern and it going very quickly. I'd like to have it done for her by Monday, so I'll probably work on that tonight. I'm also working on a very wide, very long scarf for me. The name of the pattern is the Bay of Fundy, which is what caught my eye in the first place. The Bay of Fundy is not too far from where I live. Hopefully this summer we'll get a chance to explore it more.

 All in all, it's been a fairly quiet day with me cowering inside from the cold. At least tomorrow it will be warmer!

Friday 16 January 2015

Snow Day?

Woohoo! Both kids were healthy enough to go to school today. Of course when I woke up I wasn't sure if they were going to have school today. It was snowing pretty hard out there. I kept checking the various websites I have bookmarked to see if there were any announcements about school but nope, none. It was going to be a regular school day. But, my Washington, D.C. area brain thought, how can they have school? It's snoooooowing! Then I remembered, we live in Canada now. It takes a LOT to cancel school up here.

I grew up in the Washington D.C. area. That area doesn't know how to handle snow. A few snowflakes falling from the sky can cause a chain-reaction like you would not believe. The governments there do treat the roads and they have snow plows, but drivers in the area aren't used to snow so they don't really know how to drive in it. No one has snow tires on their cars because honestly, that area doesn't get that much snow to need them. But it is usually enough snow to cause traffic nightmares.

Like what you ask? Here's a good example. A few years ago, my husband was at work when it started snowing. On a good day he could make the drive home (a 10 mile drive at most) in 15-20 minutes. The snow started falling right before rush hour, which is totally misnamed. Seriously, it should be called sitting hour or creeping hour because that's pretty much what you do - sit in your car and creep along when the car in front of you moves, yelling curses at the drivers around you for not driving faster. And hour should most likely be hourS. It is a very angry time on the roads.

Anyway, the snow started falling and everyone freaked out and jumped in their cars to rush home before they got snowbound at work. Now, this wouldn't have been such a problem except with all these people rushing to get home the snow plows couldn't do their job. And with the snow plows unable to clear/treat the roads, people were getting stuck, which led to the snow plows unable to do their job...see the vicious cycle here? This led to it taking HOURS for people to get home. When the hubby left the office it took him 5 hours to get home. It should have been longer but he got sick of being stuck on a hill with a bunch of other people and drove on the wrong side of the road to get around them. 5 hours to go what should have taken 20 minutes.

This is why when it snows, the schools shut down. Can you imagine being stuck on a school bus for 5 hours with a bunch of rowdy kids? Sounds hellish to me too. Of course, closing school (or choosing not to) always results in criticism of the school system. Just last week they didn't close the schools when they should have and parents screamed about it. This week they closed the schools for snow and didn't really need to and parents screamed about it. And of course, after they miss so many days of school they have to make up those days, either by adding on time to the end of the year or taking away teacher work days/holidays. It's a no-win situation for the school districts. I am glad I am not the one who has to make that decision.

This is why when I got up this morning and saw it was snowing I expected schools to be closed. Even though I've been in Canada for a year and a half now and survived the worst winter in 20 years last year, I still expect school to shut down when it snows. The snow was coming down fast, the street hadn't been plowed, but the bus still came on time. And the kids went outside for recess while it was still snowing (they had a blast). They know how to handle snow up here. By noon the streets had been plowed and life was back to normal. And even last year, when we had blizzards, the kids were in school the next day, occasionally with an hour delay (usually not though). Oh, and there's no making up of school days. My friends up here looked at me funny when I asked about that last year.

Now, in D.C.'s defense, the area is a geographical nightmare for predicting snow. It often falls on the rain/snow line for storms and a slight shift in one direction or another can mean the area gets no snow or it gets 2 feet of snow. And since they get so little snow in the grand scheme of things, it would be a waste of money to keep a full-time road clearing staff like they do here.

I miss my friends and family back in the D.C. area, but I sure do not miss the traffic nightmares that occur when it snows. I do not miss having to make up snow days. I like living in a place where snow is a short inconvenience not a massive problem. And I like the fact that they put gravy on their fries up here. Try it sometime. You won't be disappointed.


Thursday 15 January 2015

Kilynn, part 3

The boy is home again sick today. He doesn't often get sick, but when he does it is bad. According to his teacher the plague is going around the classroom (okay, not the actually plague). Even she was out yesterday because of the germs that has been going around. And although he was home, I did get time to sit down and work on my story. I had planned on finishing the massive MegaBloks Halo set I started for him yesterday but chose not too when my whole body protested at it. My fingers are sore from snapping together the pieces and my back and legs are sore from sitting on the hardwood floor for hours. I will finish up the set tomorrow, sitting in a chair at a table. I have learned my lesson.

So, here you go. Part 3 of Kilynn's story. To recap, Kilynn fell asleep outside the town walls and awoke when she heard the warning bells, letting everyone know the mysterious Hunt was coming. She flew back to town and was hauled over the town walls by her brothers just minutes before The Hunt arrived. When we left her, she had just been dumped in a corner and the lights had gone out.

Kilynn, part 3

Kilynn sat in the corner of the darkened room, gasping for breath. A voice somewhere in the room whispered, “Quiet! They’re coming!” Kilynn tried desperately to calm her breathing. The guard was right – The Hunt was coming. She couldn't hear it, but she could feel a deep vibration in the ground. As each second passed the vibration grew stronger until suddenly it seemed to pop. All sound in the room vanished, as if Kilynn had gone deaf. This calm before the storm was the most disturbing part. She had known people to go mad in those few seconds of utter silence, had seen them run screaming from the room and into the arms of The Hunt. That was why the town always made sure people were securely locked into rooms when The Hunt came.

As suddenly as it had gone, Kilynn’s hearing returned with a frightful thunderous crashing sound that reminded her of the waves she had seen at her lone trip to the beach. She could hear it even down here, deep underground surrounded by thick stone walls. The Hunt had arrived and was swarming through the town. Under the roaring sound she could hear unearthly moans, screams, and a high-pitched cackling laugh.

Kilynn drew in a deep breath then let it out slowly, shuddering at the sounds above her. It was beginning to dawn on her just how close she had come to being taken by The Hunt. The shudder turned to shaking as shock set in. Kilynn drew back further into the corner she sat in, drawing in her knees and curling up in a small ball as she tried to stop shaking. As she wriggled trying to get comfortable, Kilynn bumped the person sitting next to her. Ryl let out a grunt and pushed her away. Closing her eyes and taking another deep breath, Kilynn listened to the breathing around her. Her brothers were sitting on either side of her, both seething with rage. Uh-oh thought Kilynn, I am in serious trouble. She knew her two older brothers would let her have it once The Hunt was done. Her shaking had been subsiding but the thought of her two brothers’ rage brought its return.

Suddenly she felt a hand touch her shoulder. Herry she thought. Yes, he was furious with her but he was always the first to offer comfort when needed. Ryl is so different from Herry she thought. Ryl would take at least a day or two to forgive her for this while Herry probably already had. She sighed quietly as she felt Herry's hand rub her shoulder and slowly her shaking stopped. Exhausted by her ordeal, Kilynn rested her head on her drawn-up knees, closed her eyes, and promptly fell asleep.

She had no clue how long she had been asleep when the gentle hand on her shoulder turned rougher, shaking her awake. “Kilynn, wake up,” Herry said in her ear. She opened her eyes to see that a torch had been lit in the room. The Hunt had passed and people were slowly making their way through the door and back up the twisting staircase. Kilynn rubbed her eyes then took Herry’s outstretched hand. He gently pulled her to her feet then wrapped her in a tight hug. Tears leaked from the corner of her eyes as she hugged her brother. It wasn't until she felt a wetness on her head that she realized that Herry was crying too.

After a few minutes she took a step back, breaking the hug. She stood in front of Herry, eyes fixed on the floor. “I’m sorry,” she whispered. “I’m so sorry for this. I must have fallen asleep out there. Thank you, Herry.” Herry just shook his head and pulled her back into the hug.

“It happens, little sister. I’m just glad Ryl and I were able to find you in time. We cut it too close. I owe the guards a few rounds of ale for keeping the doors open for us.” At the mention of Ryl’s name, Kilynn looked around for her other brother.

“Where is Ryl?” she asked. “Oh, and I’ll pay for the ales,” she added. She knew her brother would refuse the money, but she would try.

“Ryl left as soon as the door was opened. You know how he is. He needs time to cool down before he sees you again,” Herry answered as he guided her towards the door. He stopped to light a torch from the pile by the door then slowly led the way upstairs. The pair walked silently, saving their breath the long climb up to the guard tower. Kilynn was amazed at how long a climb it was. In her mad dash down she hadn’t realized just how long the staircase was. She was also amazed that she hadn’t fallen and broken her leg or neck in the descent.


The siblings passed through the trapdoor at the top of the stairs. Herry stopped to hand coins to each of the guards on duty; that was easier than meeting them all at the tavern later. Kilynn stepped out onto the town wall, taking a deep breath of fresh air. She glanced up, marveling at the stars glimmering brightly against the moonless night sky.

Wednesday 14 January 2015

Mega-Mommy

I had planned to work on my story today. I expected both kids to be in school and the house to be quiet so I could focus. Alas, J woke up this morning with a wretched head cold so I let him stay home today. I figured I could still work on my story - he's 9 and can entertain himself with books, toys, TV, and if I let him, video games. Then he came to me and asked me if I would help him build a MegaBloks set he got for Christmas. And because he was sick I said yes. Oh...what was I thinking?

This set has 1161 pieces. Now some of that includes the figures that came with it but still, that's a lot of pieces. No problem I thought because MegaBloks does what Lego does, right? Lego is considerate of its builders and divides their sets into bags, labeled 1, 2, etc. It's wonderful because it gives you great stopping points when you need a break. You only open the bag you are working on and the other pieces are safely tucked away in their bags, waiting for you to reach their part. Since Lego does it I figured MegaBloks did it too. Sadly I was wrong...

MegaBloks just dumps pieces all willy-nilly into bags. The pieces for step one were scattered among 4 different bags. To make this go faster we decided to sort out that 10+ bags of pieces. Then I took a closer look at the pieces. Almost all of them are a dark greenish-black. J's carpet is dark blue. This was never going to work. I would go blind before I even made it to step 5. Thankfully I had an extra white sheet which I put down on the floor. So much better! We began sorting but 15 minutes in we were still sorting. Two bags just got dumped into green Ikea bins because they were filled with tiny pieces that I sure as hell wasn't sorting.

Finally, we started building. About 10 steps in 'we' became the royal we - J began to lose interest in building it. I don't blame him. His nose was running pretty much non-stop, his eyes were watering, and the sheer number of pieces was overwhelming even for me. I told him to go rest and I would continue working on it. Yes, that just secured my nomination for Mommy of the Year.

I started around 10:30. By 1:00 I was at step 53...out of 142. I had to take a break. After some lunch, a much needed shower, and a dose of ibuprofen, I went back to work. I am now at step 90 out of 142. I don't know if I can stand up straight anymore. Hindsight is 20/20 they say, and if I had to do it over again I would have set up shop at the desk in our office instead of on the floor. I don't know if my back will ever be the same. I may have to treat myself to a massage after finishing this damn set.

But I will finish it. I can see the light at the end of the tunnel. The pile of pieces is getting smaller and the plane I'm building is getting bigger. But if I ever meet someone from MegaBloks, I will be punching them in the nose for not breaking the set up into parts like Lego does. Seriously, would it be so hard to do that? I think not. And once I am done with it, I may or may not let J play with it. :-)

Tuesday 13 January 2015

Galavant

Today I had planned to do a detailed recap of Galavant. I had planned to sit down and watch the show again, taking detailed notes. Notice I said 'had planned'? S has been running a fever off and on for the past few days. She woke up at 4:30 with a headache and feeling very hot. After giving her some ibuprofen, I tucked her back into bed. When she woke up this morning her fever was down but not completely gone. So I kept her home from school today. With her home from school I won't really have a chance to rewatch Galavant. I could try to watch it with her around since most of the jokes would go over her head but there was some stuff that just isn't for a 5 year old. What follows is what I remember from the episode. If I get things wrong, I'm sorry. :-)

First, I thought it was funnier than the first episode. Our hero, Galavant, and his companions Sid and Isabella are still traveling to Valencia to rescue Madalena and Isabella's parents. They stop for a night in Sid's hometown of...wait for it...Sidneyland. Apparently the people in the town don't travel much because they believe Sid's letters home saying he is a dragon-slaying, joust-winning knight of the realm. Sid begs Galavant to play the role of his squire and Isabella, who reveals that the Valencians love theater, takes the role of Sid's betrothed. Sid's parents are thrilled he's come to visit them and even more thrilled that he is engaged to Isabella. Galavant, who has reluctantly agreed to be Sid's squire, hangs out with the other squires and realizes how much of an ass he has been (through a song no less). Galavant apologizes to his companions and they leave Sid's town.

As they get closer to Valencia, Isabella advises them from traveling a certain way. Galavant ignores her advice and proceeds to get them captured by pirates led by the Pirate King, played by Hugh Bonneville. It was awesome to see him all scruffy after seeing him all prim and proper as Lord Grantham in Downton Abbey. The pirates had been stranded on land when their boat washed ashore and are terrible at being land pirates. Galavant agrees to help them free their ship if they will transport our heroes to Valencia. The Pirate King agrees and are heroes' journey continues.

Meanwhile in Valencia, King Richard is bored. He questions the people about what they used to do for fun. They tell him about how they used to spend hours in the evenings performing theater productions. Richard doesn't like the sound of that. He asks a bald-headed man about what else they used to have and his reply is "Balls" which causes Richard to laugh like my 9 y/o son does when he hears balls. Richard discovers the man is a eunuch and encourages the people to kick him where it won't hurt. He even demonstrates how to do it when he feels some of the people aren't doing their best.

Did anyone else notice he was bald and wearing robes? Now maybe they were just playing into the stereotype for eunuchs (is there even a stereotype?) but my first thought when I saw him was they were giving a nod to Varys from Game of Thrones. Maybe I'm reading too much into it or just wishes GoT was back on.

Richard decides to host a ball but of course he's killed all the musicians. He and Gareth, his right-hand man, manage to scrape together a band composed of the executioners. Their song is truly unique. While the Valencians are dancing, Richard realizes they aren't having fun and some are even fainting from hunger because Richard destroyed all their food. He invites them to share their feelings and they call him and Madalena all sorts of names. The last person to speak is the eunuch, who says the king is so stupid he doesn't realize his wife is sleeping with the jester. Oops...

Richard is upset that his wife is sleeping with the jester. But he's not upset that she's cheating on him; he's upset because the jester is funnier than he is. He goes to the jester (whose name we find out later is Steve) and asks him to help the king be funnier instead of asking him to stop sleeping with Madalena. The jester, scared out of his wits, agrees to help Richard. But Richard is clueless and everything he tries comes out wrong. He ends up putting on a comedy show for Madalena. He tries different jokes but the only thing that makes her laugh is when Richard hits Gareth in the face with a pie. Richard takes this as a sign of success. Later,Madalena sees the jester and asks him if he wants to go to his chamber. After his encounter with Richard, Steve declines and this makes Madalena angry and she has him hauled away to the dungeon. Poor Steve!

Okay, there we go. It's probably got errors in it but it's the best I can remember.

As a side note, I usually drink a cup of tea while I write. I had bought some pumpkin spice tea back in the fall when pumpkin spice was "the thing". I hadn't had any for a while so I thought I'd try some today. Bad choice! I forgot that it was icky. The more I drank the worse it tasted. I should have stuck with my Captain Swan blend tea that my good friend gave me for Christmas. It never disappoints me! Pumpkin spice and tea just don't mix.

Monday 12 January 2015

Resolutions

Ah, New Year's resolutions. It is the 12th day of January. How many of you have stuck to your resolutions? I bet a lot of people haven't. I have to say, it is hard sometimes to stick to them. I tried this year to set resolutions that were reasonable. Mine this year were to write daily and buy less yarn/knit from my stash.

So far, I've been doing well with the first one. It was tough over the weekend to squeeze time in for writing but I managed to do it. And now I've made it 7 days through the 21 they say it takes to make something a habit. Some days have been harder than others to think of what I wanted to write and some days I've had too many things I wanted to write about, which is nice because then I can always save that topic for another day. I still have to work more on my Kilynn story, and I had intended to write a recap for Galavant today. Galavant will hopefully be tomorrow and Kilynn Wednesday. I'm still trying to figure out where that story is going. The second resolution, about the yarn, hasn't been a challenge - until today.

I love to knit. I try to squeeze it in where I can. I have been known to take knitting projects with me to the hockey rink, the soccer field, and to the doctor's office. It is hard for me these days to just sit and watch TV without my hands being busy. And my friends in my neighbourhood have come to realize how much I enjoy knitting and have asked me to make things for them or as gifts for others. This has been fun for me - I enjoy having someone to make things for and getting paid for my work is a bonus. I know I undercharge for my work - I usually just charge for the cost of the yarn. If they pay me anything over that, it is their choice. I do it out of friendship, not as a job.

Recently a good friend sent me a picture of a knit hat and asked me if I could make one like it for her. I looked at it and realized that yes, I could. I was busy with a few other projects but one of those got finished today so I was able to start working on her hat. I was thinking that I didn't have the yarn I needed and I was going to have to go out and buy some (yay!). But I decided to be good first and checked my sizable stash and found that yes, I had the yarn I needed not only for the hat she wants but for a second hat I saw recently and wanted to make.

In a way I was disappointed that I had the yarn I needed. I wanted to go out and buy new yarn even though I didn't need it. Resisting that urge was difficult. I went ahead and got started on the project so I would be less likely to run out to get yarn. I did other things to distract myself - like doing a much needed purge of the refrigerator, and working on this entry. Writing down that I want to go buy yarn is helping me to resist the urge. It isn't easy though.

And I understand it's not easy for others to stick to their resolutions. The friend I'm making the hat for made a resolution to give up her favorite candy. I had to admire her for that - I am an admitted chocoholic and it would be extremely hard for me to give it up. Yesterday she broke that resolution and I won't judge her for doing it. I could have easily broken one of my resolutions today (and I thank the snow falling for that. Didn't feel like slopping around in it).

She said she should have made moderation her resolution. I think that's a good idea - moderation in everything. I will do my best to knit from my stash and only buy yarn when I don't have what I need. And I will try to moderate my chocolate consumption because I should. But I won't give it up completely because chocolate tastes good. We'll see how the year goes. Resolutions - love'em, hate'em, keep'em, break'em. And try for moderation.

Sunday 11 January 2015

Sunday night is bath night...

So, J, the 9 y/o went swimming today. And then played in a hockey game this afternoon. Between the two he smelled funny - but not in a good way funny. He needed to take a shower. This is always an adventure.

First off, we have to convince him he needs a shower, which can take as long as 10 minutes. He always says he likes smelling like a locker room. I think if we let him he wouldn't take a shower for at least a few weeks. Convincing him he needs a shower is usually like herding cats - not much fun and usually involving screeching. Eventually he gives in and agrees.

Once he agrees to take a shower, it still takes him a good long time to actually take the shower. He will spend 5 minutes just getting out his pjs and heading into the bathroom where he gets undressed. This takes around 10 minutes and involves pew-pew noises. Sometimes I hear singing and possibly dancing. When we ask him what he's doing, his response is, "getting ready for my shower." Because that is how you get ready for a shower when you're 9 apparently.

After telling him 4 or 5 times to actually take his shower, he will start the water. Now, for someone who gives us such a hard time about taking a shower, he takes the longest showers. What should take 5 minutes most (he is only 9 after all) will take a good 10 to 15 minutes unless one of us tells him to hurry up. A few times when I've been home by myself with the kids and distracted he has taken 20 minute showers. Good thing we don't pay for water by the liter/gallon or he'd be getting hosed off in the backyard (okay, not really).

What is he doing in there you ask? He is singing, and dancing, and making pew-pew sounds again. I have heard him singing Christmas carols, the narwhal song (look it up on YouTube), and the Gummy Bear song (again, YouTube). When I happen to look in the bathroom to tell him to finish up there are both clean and dirty clothes scattered around the room. Apparently when he is pew-pewing before his shower it involves clothes flying around the room.

So finally, he is done with the shower, dressed, and his dirty clothes are possibly in the hamper, possibly on his bedroom floor. And although we have plenty of combs and brushes around the house, they all seem to magically disappear when the shower shuts off because he never seems to be able to find one. Who knew that hairbrushes and combs were able to walk off on their own? Amazing, eh?

This is what a Sunday night in our house is like. Of course when we mention a shower to S, the 5 y/o, she is done in like 10 minutes total, beginning to end. At least it's easy to get one of my kids to take a shower. :-)


Saturday 10 January 2015

Saturday!

It's Saturday and the kids are home today. It's been a busy day around our house.

I took S, the 5 y/o, to her first day of the new session of swimming class. She did really well - they are learning the first steps towards diving. She insisted on wearing a life jacket after all the other kids in her class took theirs off, but she still did everything that the other kids were doing. She was nervous at the beginning of class but then she saw familiar faces and was happy. She is determined to be a good swimmer. Surprisingly there was only one helicopter parent today. I'm guessing most of the kids had taken the fall session so the parents were more at ease letting their kids go with the instructors.

When we got home, we all went into clean-up mode. The 9 y/o's room was a total disaster, so he was working on that with the help of the hubby. I worked on the playroom while S played quietly in her room. I'm glad that the playroom has been straightened up. We moved J's Lego stash to the playroom, which means we will end up doing the Lego firewalk sometime in the future I think. Christmas decorations got put away. The vacuum actually got run today! The house is in a relatively presentable state, which is always nice.

Now the kids are outside playing in the snow. I'm sure before too long they will be asking me or the hubby to take them over to the neighbour's outdoor ice rink. S is getting much better about skating on her own without the help of these nifty push/support things they have here. Of course J flies around the rink like crazy, scaring his sister. It is very cool that our neighbour built the rink in his yard. LOL as I was writing this the hubby came in and announced he was taking the kids over to skate. I will enjoy my short break. I took them over last night while he was sick and it was fun. I'm just feeling worn out today. I think I'm fighting a cold although I'd rather have a cold than what he had last night!

I'm off to curl up with a cup of chai and my book for a bit - I'm still working on Outlander. I'm really enjoying it!

Friday 9 January 2015

Kilynn's story, part 2

I hadn't planned on working on Kilynn's story today but as I sat down at the computer it just started to come out. Seems she wants everyone to know if she makes it to safety or not...shall we find out?

Pacing back and forth in front of the gate, Kilynn sensed, more than heard, movement behind her. She glanced across the empty plain at the trees and the mountains beyond. The trees had begun to shake and a deep rumble vibrated the ground. The Hunt was on the move. Looking up at the top of the wall she could see the guard lights being extinguished one by one.  Riding along the base of the wall, she screamed as loud as she could.

Suddenly a familiar face popped over the edge, followed by a second one. Tears of joy streamed down her face, blurring the sight of her brothers Teryl and Heryld above her. A long rope ladder slapped into the stone wall next to her head. Kilynn grabbed the rope and began climbing as fast as she could while her brothers dragged the ladder upwards. She felt her horse take off running as soon as she had cleared the saddle. She spared a second to hope the poor animal would find safety from the coming danger.

Above her, Kilynn’s brothers were yelling at her to move faster. Time seemed to stand still as she climbed while her brothers pulled. Suddenly they pulled her over the top of the wall, sending her tumbling onto the wooden platform with a thump. Heryld hauled her to her feet and they took off running into the guard’s watchtower, Teryl slamming the door shut behind them. A single torch burned in a holder, revealing an open trapdoor in the floor. Heryld pushed her towards the trapdoor, nearly sending her falling down the steep stairs. She grabbed the torch Teryl had removed from the wall then began the mad dash down the stairs to safety. Behind her, she heard the trapdoor slam shut and the locking bolt slide home. Two sets of footsteps echoed behind her as she ran down, growing dizzy with the twisting nature of the stairs.


Reaching the bottom of the stairs, Kilynn stupidly stopped moving. Herry slammed into her, sending her crashing to the floor and her torch flying into the darkened room in front of them. Ryl came flying around the last turned and tripped over his siblings. 

“Dammit, Herry! Get up and drag that sister of ours with you,” Ryl grumbled as he struggled to his feet. A guard waiting at the door grabbed Ryl’s arm and dragged him inside. Another guard grabbed Herry and pulled both him and Kilynn into the room, throwing them into a corner with their brother. Behind her Kilynn heard the door slam shut, the torch sputtered out, and the room was plunged into silent darkness.

That's all for today. The story train jumped the tracks with having to go to the bus stop and a lost child ending up at our house. I do have a good idea of what will happen next, I just need to get a chance to get it out of my head and into print. Until I can do that, I hope Kilynn's brothers aren't too angry with her...


Thursday 8 January 2015

Let me tell you a story...

There was a time when my mind was in constant creative mode back when I was working in the video game industry. I would think up stories and turn them into something a player could experience while running through the game I worked on. When I had kids, my mind was still in creative mode, but it was a different kind of creative - coming up with ways to get my kids to try new foods, not fight with each other, etc. So the stories kind of got trapped in the back of my mind, waiting for a time they could come to the surface and be heard. That time usually seems to be right after I've turned off my e-reader and before I've fallen asleep.

Sometimes theses stories are just a sentence or two, begging for me to remember them, expand them, write them down. Sometimes they are what seems like the first chapter of a book. These are usually the ones that show up when I have trouble sleeping and I'm trying to trick my brain into going to sleep. Sometimes these stories just stick around for a day or two, then wander off until the next time they need to stretch their legs. But sometimes a story sticks around, showing up at weird times, like when I'm in the shower or driving down the road. With these I have to pick up a pencil or fire up the computer and write them down. Sometimes that's all that happens - that fragment of a story is done for now, and may get more life later, maybe not. But sometimes the next part of the story reveals itself, like it was waiting for space in my head. This probably seems strange to some people, but it's how my brain works.

So, with that, here is a bit of a story that made an appearance last night. Where it will go, I don't know, but it is asking to be written down. Perhaps more will come after, perhaps not. But it wants to be shared. And maybe the more of these I write down, the more they might actually turn into something more than a fragment.


Kilynn woke with a start, the sudden silence of the woods around her startling her from her sleep. She rubbed her eyes as she glanced up. Her brain subconsciously registered that it was dark, and that the echoes of a shrill bell were fading quickly but sleep-addled as she was, she made no sense of it. Her horse, hobbled nearby, stirred nervously. Kilynn shook her head, trying to clear it as she struggled to wake up. She had been dreaming when she had been awoken, dreaming of the town's bells ringing...

"The Hunt!"The words blurted from her mouth with a squeak, startling her already skittish horse. Kilynn began to haphazardly throw her scattered belongings into her battered leather sack, muttering curses under her breath. She had not meant to fall asleep this far from the town, not on tonight of all nights. Fighting down the rising panic, Kilynn glanced out at the mountains that surrounded the town but could detect no movement. That gave her hope that she might actually make it back to the town gates before they were sealed.

Kilynn snatched the reins from where she had tied them, then quickly mounted her horse. The poor creature was already starting to tremble, which frightened Kilynn. Animals were more sensitive to the approaching Hunt than humans. If her horse was already this scared then she didn't have much time left. With a sharp jerk she turned the horse's head towards home, kicking him into a full gallop.

As they flew down the road, Kilynn continued to curse at herself. It was completely stupid of her to have ventured so far away from the town on the brink of a Hunt. But after the fight with her parents this morning she had longed to be as far from town as possible. Now if she didn't make it to the gates in time she may never see her parents or brothers again. With that thought, she leaned over the horse's neck and yelled at it, urging it to go faster.

Kilynn risked a glance backward but she detected no movement behind her. Maybe she would make it after all, she thought. She burst from the woods that marked the outer edge of the town. It was a straight mile-long run to the town gates and she could see there were still lights glowing. Even as her hope soared, the town bell began to ring signifying the gates were closing. Screaming with frustration, Kilynn pushed the horse even harder and the horse, exhausted already from the mad dash through the woods, somehow managed to run faster. He seemed to realize how close safety was and was determined to get them there.

As Kilynn and her horse raced down the road, she could see the massive town gate slowly closing. She began to scream as long as she could, "Wait! I'm coming!"A guard on the wall saw her but turned away, hurrying down the steps Kilynn knew lay behind the wall. She was almost there when the gate swung shut with a deep thump. Tears of frustration and fear streaming down her face, Kilynn looked up at the wall, hoping to see a face up there. If she could catch someone's attention they could throw down a rope ladder for her. She would lose her dear horse, but she was willing to sacrifice the poor beast for her own safety. She continued screaming, hoping someone would hear her....


That's it for now. I have two ideas for the next part of the story but I have yet to decide which way it will go. Perhaps tonight the story will reveal which way it should go. Or maybe this will end up being one of those Choose Your Own Adventure stories I used to read as a kid. :-)