Monday 19 January 2015

Kilynn, part 4

I got a good long time today to work on Kilynn's story. I still have a lot of work to do on it, but here is part of what I wrote today. I am not totally sure I like everything I wrote and may go back and change some things, but for now I'll put it out there as is.

Herry walked up and stood next to her as she stared at the sky. He glanced up and sighed. “We’ll need to go soon, Kilee. The reports should be in soon and Mother and Father will be expecting us home.” Kilynn smiled at Herry’s use of her nickname. He hadn’t called her Kilee since they became teenagers and she threw a fit about how babyish the nickname sounded. But her smile faded as she turned towards Herry. 

“Do we have to go home? How about we go hear the report first. I’m just not ready to face Mother and Father yet,” she replied. The thought of the fight that had sent her fleeing the town was still fresh in her mind. She wasn't quite ready to forgive her parents yet and knowing how stubborn her parents could be, she was pretty sure they weren't ready either. It usually took everyone a day or two to calm down and think rationally.

“Yes, let’s go. They will be ringing the bell soon. We can ask Wyllam how angry Mother and Father still are, although I expect that your disappearing act hasn't helped them calm down any. But don’t worry, baby sister, I will be there when you see Mother and Father again. I am on your side. And Ryl is too, even if he doesn't often show it.” Herry grabbed her hand as they started to walk to the steps.

As they walked towards the town square, Kilynn couldn't help but think how different her brothers were. She, Herry and Ryl were triplets, a rarity in their town. Mother had told them that she had known she was pregnant with at least two babies, for she could feel two heads and four feet kicking her. Herry and Ryl were born within minutes of each other, with identical faces, blond hair, and green eyes like their father. Then came Kilynn, her surprise baby, as Mother called her. She was born with a full head of dark hair and bright blue eyes. All three babies cried non-stop until Mother had put the three of them into the cradle together. Snuggled up together, the triplets stopped crying and promptly fell asleep.

As they grew older, it became apparently that they had very different personalities. While they were identical in looks and build, Ryl was short tempered and held grudges while Herry was patient and forgiving. Kilynn, being the youngest and only daughter in the family, grew up to be stubborn and fierce, unafraid to try anything her six older brothers were doing. She was a good foot shorter than her brothers, and didn't resemble anyone in her family but her mother, who also had dark hair and blue eyes. While her twin brothers often teased her for looking nothing like them, they would protect her ferociously if anyone should dare to pick on her. It was comforting to know that Kilynn could depend on them when she needed them. She smiled up at Herry and gave his hand a gentle squeeze as they turned the corner into the town square.

The town square was filling with people. Looking around, Kilynn spotted the familiar faces of neighbours and friends. A look of relief often passed over people’s faces as they spotted loved ones, realizing they had not been lost to The Hunt. Kilynn and Herry both scanned the crowd, trying to spot their oldest brother, Wyllam.

“There he is,” Herry said, pointing to a tall, dark haired man standing near the edge of the podium. As Herry and Kilynn made their way through the crowd, Herry said, “Wow, Father is here too. In fact, it looks like all of our older brothers are here.”

That worried Kilynn. Perhaps Ryl hadn't made it back to home in time before Father sent Wyll with the report. Kilynn scanned the crowd and didn't see her mother. That worried her even more. Perhaps her family thought she hadn't survived and came here to hear her name be read. Maybe her mother was too upset, thinking her only daughter was lost, to come to hear the reading of the names. But then Kilynn saw Ryl standing on the other side of Wyll. Now she was very confused. Where was Mother?

Kilynn and Herry walked up and stood by Ryl, Herry placing her between himself and Ryl. Wyll walked over to Herry and whispered something in his ear then returned to his place by Father’s side. Father glanced over at them and nodded in greeting to Herry but totally ignored Kilynn. Oh dear she thought, Father is really angry with me, and rightfully so. I screwed up big this time. She glanced around at her other brothers but none of them made eye contact with her. She knew she was really in the doghouse. Sometimes it really stinks to be the only daughter out of seven children, she couldn’t help thinking.

The Captain of the Guard stepped up on the podium and the crowd that had been quietly talking fell silent. The Captain cleared his throat and began to speak. “This time around I am happy to say we only lost 10 people to The Hunt.  I want to thank….” Kilynn tuned the Captain out while he made his long-winded speech about how he was grateful to the citizens for doing their best to keep safe during these times. She perked up again as he read the first name. It was not a name she recognized, but she still felt bad for the family nearby as they sobbed at the loss of their loved one.

Slowly, allowing each family time to grieve a bit, the Captain read the names. As he neared the end of the list, Kilynn glanced up at her Father and was surprised to see tears rolling down his face. Was one of the lost people his friend? She hadn’t recognized any of the names so far so she didn't think so. Then she noticed that there were tears on her brothers’ faces also. She felt Herry, and surprisingly Ryl, slip their hands into hers as the Captain announced he had reached the final name. The final name must be a friend of theirs, Kilynn thought. That’s why her mother wasn't here – she was upset at losing a friend. Kilynn braced herself to hear the name of their now-gone friend.

“Vanyssa Frankson,” The Captain announced.

Kilynn let out a gasp as if someone had just kicked her in the stomach, driving all the air from her lungs. Why had the Captain just called out her mother’s name? She glanced at her father and saw he had his face buried in his hands, sobbing. Her brothers were hugging each other, crying as well. Kilynn sank to her knees, jerking her hands from her brothers’ grasp and wrapping them around her stomach as she struggled to breathe.

“No,” she whispered over and over, shaking her head. “No, not mother.” She heard someone yelling no over and over but didn't realize it was her own voice until Herry and Ryl sank down beside her, wrapping their arms around her, both calling her name. As their voices broke through her screaming, she stopped and began to sob, tears pouring down her face. She buried her face into the shoulders of her brothers and cried as if her heart was broken.

Kilynn glanced up as she felt a strange hand touch her head then another. The townspeople were clearing the square, now that the Captain was done. Friends of theirs walked by slowly, stopping to lay a hand on her father’s shoulder, nod to her brothers, pat her head, letting her family know they weren’t alone in their grief. Kilynn looked at her father and saw that he was struggling to get himself under control. She did the same, taking deep breaths of air to clear her head. Ryl and Herry realized what she was doing and slowly released her from their protective arms.

Kilynn struggled to her feet and faced her father. “How?”she asked. “How did this happen?” She needed to know what happened to her mother. Her mother was always so careful, making sure to be in a safe place on the night of The Hunt. How could her mother have been taken?

“Do you really want to discuss this here?” her father asked, looking at her for the first time since she arrived in the square. Kilynn thought about it for a moment. The few people that were left in the square probably already knew what had happened, and anyway, she didn't care if they heard what her father had to say. All she cared about was knowing what happened to her mother. She looked her father in the eye and nodded. Father stood staring at her for a minute. There wasn't any anger in his face anymore, only sadness. “Fine. I will tell you,” he said then paused to give her a chance to stop him. When she didn't he continued, “She went out looking for you. It is all your fault.”

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